Mastertoo Apprentice
Posts : 3 Credits : 5 Join date : 2010-10-27 Location : Halo Ring
Bio Armor: Spartan - Mark V Weapon: UNSC - Assualt Rifle Enemy: Covenant
| Subject: Spartan 110 Thu Nov 04, 2010 11:32 am | |
| Name:Spartan 110 (Jhonny)
Service Tag: 399
Age: 29
Gender: male
Height:6 feet
Colour: red
Personality: silent, angry all the time, aggressive in battle, never want to lose.
Level/Rank: Private
Background: The Spartan 110 did not have parents, his parents died in the Battle of Reach (2552), but he stayed only at age 6 was proposed to be Spartan. He did it for the honor of his family and to avenge the Covenant. Now 29 years old and is proposed to do everything to be a Spartan.
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Horbur Admin
Posts : 96 Credits : 151 Join date : 2009-08-17 Location : Riding a banshee shooting down spartans
Bio Armor: Covenant - Councilor Weapon: Covenant - Energy Sword Enemy: UNSC
| Subject: Re: Spartan 110 Sat Nov 06, 2010 10:31 am | |
| You're missing a personality, and if you can't speak english well, then you really should use a translator. | |
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Mastertoo Apprentice
Posts : 3 Credits : 5 Join date : 2010-10-27 Location : Halo Ring
Bio Armor: Spartan - Mark V Weapon: UNSC - Assualt Rifle Enemy: Covenant
| Subject: spartan 110 Sat Nov 06, 2010 10:57 am | |
| ok im using translator and i put my personality. | |
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Horbur Admin
Posts : 96 Credits : 151 Join date : 2009-08-17 Location : Riding a banshee shooting down spartans
Bio Armor: Covenant - Councilor Weapon: Covenant - Energy Sword Enemy: UNSC
| Subject: Re: Spartan 110 Sat Nov 06, 2010 3:10 pm | |
| It's all good, but can you redo the background with the translator? Thanks! | |
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Mastertoo Apprentice
Posts : 3 Credits : 5 Join date : 2010-10-27 Location : Halo Ring
Bio Armor: Spartan - Mark V Weapon: UNSC - Assualt Rifle Enemy: Covenant
| Subject: Re: Spartan 110 Sat Nov 06, 2010 4:05 pm | |
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