Spartan 65 Apprentice
Posts : 2 Credits : 5 Join date : 2011-03-22 Location : Unidentified Planet
Bio Armor: Spartan - Mark V Weapon: UNSC - Shotgun Enemy: Covenant
| Subject: Spartan 65 Template Wed Mar 23, 2011 6:24 am | |
| hello, my name is Spartan 65, my service tag is 065, my age is 22, i am male, i am 6' 8'' tall, my color is green, i am outgoing, i have just graduated in becoming a UNSC Spartan. i joined the UNSC at age 10 and trained as a spartan for 10 years Name: Spartan 65Service Tag:065Age:22Gender:MaleHeight:6' 8"Colour:GreenPersonality: outgoingLevel/Rank: Spartan (rank: corporal)Background: joined the UNSC at age 10, trained for 10 years as a spartan, currently fighting in the war (been fighting for 2 years)Skill Assessment -------Sample Post------- Shots being fired, marines dying. we landed on an unidentified planet 5 hours ago. we have been fighting constantly and more have been dying. now, i was the only spartan left on this planet to help. As i was being outnumbed 50 to 30, my men were dying constantly. i grabbed a shotgun, and said: "MEN, fall back!" and by the time we got back to our camp, most of my men were already dead. then, someone said "Look!. A Pelican!" as we looked at the sky, we knew that the battle was not over. we were winning now. HOPE YOU LIKED! | |
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xXMETALSLUGXx66 Moderator
Posts : 120 Credits : 176 Join date : 2010-11-05 Age : 30 Location : "Light of Honor" Personal Flagship
Bio Armor: Covenant - Commando Weapon: Covenant - Carbine Enemy: UNSC
| Subject: Re: Spartan 65 Template Fri Apr 08, 2011 9:24 am | |
| Decent. Finish your blank spots and you are defiantly approved. Oh, and when you write stories, be sure to use third person. | |
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Spartan 65 Apprentice
Posts : 2 Credits : 5 Join date : 2011-03-22 Location : Unidentified Planet
Bio Armor: Spartan - Mark V Weapon: UNSC - Shotgun Enemy: Covenant
| Subject: Re: Spartan 65 Template Sat Apr 09, 2011 2:23 pm | |
| - xXMETALSLUGXx66 wrote:
- Decent. Finish your blank spots and you are defiantly approved. Oh, and when you write stories, be sure to use third person.
ok, but im approved? sweet! | |
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